susposedly according to the plot he has eyes that see through that but author forgot he did that
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Fantasy · DaoistpjUWEL
because a name we cant pronounce is so much better
"What happened… Where am I? If I remember well, I was returning home after Joel's little sister's birthday party…"
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
i couldnt spell the mispelled word right lol
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War · mystic dark
oops fowarad sorry
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War · mystic dark
ehhh? teleportion isnt so uncommon that its obviously something someone would block when locking people up. although his guild teleportation is special its not all powerful
Since that was the case, Lux decided to let Aurora have some rest first and deal with the issue once she had woken up.
Fantasy · Elyon
no no! thanis u. lol
ch 229 Phase Two Complete
Sci-fi · Agent_047
its like im reading a report on a novel instead of a novel. no dialogue just he did this he did that
ch 10 Influence of Luck
Fantasy · Calm_Mountains
richard sorge? the journalist? yeah i love old spy memoribillia i love how its vastly different from the james bond movies
ch 499 The tests (4)
Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
just ignore the ones being insulting. your never going to please everyone but alot of us just point out things we see as plot holes or weird to make story better or get reasoning behind it. ive seen alot of web novels stories change when they get a light novel and then change again as a manga so thats why i always comment my frustrations with a novel. oh btw dont take any of my complaints as me being mean i know text doesnt convey the tone in which it is said. i enjoy story and thanks for clarifying your point
ch 499 The tests (4)
Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
me oh i guess i can use a fre pass to read. immediatly regrets it as they plot to punish theo for their whole sisterhood group. i mean do u have friends? seriously pay some people to let u hang out with them where u can research dialogue
ch 501 Proud Sisters, Planning Theo's Demise, and Emel's Nightlife
Urban · StarryForestJaguar
i get ur point but as a reader this is why i think its a worry about being in known in the next country over. its because of how u mentioned that one lady mercenary knowing about him and expressing wanting to dissect him. it led us readers to think that near by countries probably know about big things like that through searching their internet or spys. i mean i would think that in a country with mercenaries frqnt would have spys embedded in that country. i mean frant knew about the thiad cryst al weapons. also i know chameleon veil doesnt work that way i was expressing a desire that u had given him a power like that on the way over. i mean there was a golden oppurtunity to give him a few new powers on the way over. also another thought is i feel as if on his way across the forest you mentioned he fought alot but u didnt give him powers from those other monsters that u didnt mention by name you just said he fought alot. im not talking about monsters he killed around others but he trekked across forest if u had rattled offf a list of random powers none of us would of batted an eye
ch 499 The tests (4)
Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
i think its weird that all this time mako has been the unofficial leader and the others not automatically voicing that especially bill
ch 240 Training in Progress (Part 2)
Fantasy · KingU
then why was he worried to use the flyssa when he was fighting soldiers? all im just sayingis that if all of a sudden an erik with a flyssa starts making a name for himself as a mercenary wouldnt it maybe draw attention to him that would warrent a a closer look? its not like he changed his appearance at all. i mean i really thought he was going to get a chameleon power and use it to change his hair color. you could explain the power not being noticable as another power by saying that of course a monster with chameleon powers wouldnt be noticeable because it defeats purpose of being a chameleon
ch 499 The tests (4)
Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
it was to the death how dare he try to save some people. would he have saved lux? no so get the f out of here with that shit
ch 844 The Power Of Faith [Part 2]
Fantasy · Elyon
no orphanage is turning down more money when it means they can help more kids
What Theo didn't know was that Ayia did the same thing but she gave 100k dollars instead. She only didn't give more because the matron didn't accept it more.
Urban · StarryForestJaguar
i love this book. its fast become my favorite novel. i wish more chapters were released every day.
ch 192 Self-Deception: A Tactical Advantage
Sci-fi · Agent_047
foreshadowing what happened to parents
Though there were some rumors that talents could be transferred to another person, the prerequisite was that the original owner of the talent had to be dead. Plus, these are only rumors, still unproven.
Flashy Adventurer System : Show Off to Get Stronger!
Fantasy · Meowder