Ten_Sin_5418

4mth

Replied to Louisery

he's the guy who was killed in the beginning of the array competition along with others

"Stop! Stop!" Emperor Fu Song's face changed slightly, "You kid, why do you keep bringing up Dantai Tao every three sentences?"

My longevity simulation

Eastern · The_peanut_gallary

Ten_Sin_5418

4mth

Replied to Lamane

this should be the combat simulator

Returning to the Tianxuan Mirror without being noticed, Li Fan, as usual, checked Zhan Qianmo's performance in "坐而论道."

My longevity simulation

Eastern · The_peanut_gallary

Ten_Sin_5418

4mth

Replied to Lamane

this should be the immortal revival organisation which he created for the kids

Li Fan silently pondered, "Although this world doesn't expect Zhang Haobo to stir up the situation, his natural talent is outstanding. It's a pity he doesn't join [复仙]."

My longevity simulation

Eastern · The_peanut_gallary

Ten_Sin_5418

9mth

Commented

are they black?

[You have killed 2 lesser humans]

Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality

Fantasy · Animosity

Ten_Sin_5418

9mth

Replied to PyrrhicWriter

those are the realms of power not like the level of talent

Onyx, Garnet, Topaz, Amethyst, Sapphire, Emerald, Ruby, and Diamond. The diamond core was considered a myth among most awakened, and there hadn't been a record of a diamond core in the last 500 years.

Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality

Fantasy · Animosity

Ten_Sin_5418

1yr

Replied to nighteagle05

your joking right? how'd you find that out?

"And lastly... The first 4 Ordeals are considered a Tutorial. You cannot lose your life and can even attempt the next Ordeal after a failure. If with these conditions, you still want to be a miserable Civilian, then maybe you are indeed no better than that ..."

The Oracle Paths

Sci-fi · Arkinslize

Ten_Sin_5418

1yr

Commented

I thought this would be like cultivation where you can extend your lifespan, kind of a let down tbh

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Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy

Fantasy · xlntz

Ten_Sin_5418

1yr

Commented

so its not their strength meaning their strength can be taken away at any time

["Equip": the primary function given to all players of "Armageddon Game". It grants the user the authority of the [Angels], though only a portion of their true power it augments the following stats: [Strength],[ Intellect], [Constitution], and [Dexterity].]

Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

Fantasy · DelzGB

Ten_Sin_5418

1yr

Commented

what kind of idiot is this

A blonde-haired punk shouted out, covering his own eyes and thrashing around, to no seeming avail.

Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

Fantasy · DelzGB

Ten_Sin_5418

1yr

Commented

NOOO

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Apocalypse: System of lotteries

Urban · FETI

Ten_Sin_5418

1yr

Commented

that's insane

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Apocalypse: System of lotteries

Urban · FETI

Ten_Sin_5418

1yr

Commented

haha he killed them with a restraint spell

Then, he used the air and restraint combo—Float and Glacier Spike. This set of Crowd Control techniques nailed the two Subdemons as though they were practice targets. He even planned on carrying out the finishing touches with three single-target damage spells with different stats—Wind Impact, Spear Flame Purification, and Void Thunderstorm.

Game Transmigration: Saving the World Again 1000 Years Later

Games · Seven Dopplegangers

Ten_Sin_5418

1yr

Commented

I hate people who assume things and then believe their own assumptions that are based on such shallow knowledge.

She had heard that heretical mages couldn't use the magic power of the Astral World because they had betrayed the Astral Laws. Therefore, they extracted and tortured the souls of others, using the pain and despair of their souls as fuel for their spells.

Game Transmigration: Saving the World Again 1000 Years Later

Games · Seven Dopplegangers

Ten_Sin_5418

1yr

Posted

I- This is the first review I've ever written but I had to write one for this book. It's not an exaggeration to say this is one of the worst books I have read in a long time. I liked the concept but the execution wasn't absolutely gutter trash. Overall, it's a very basic book with noticeable plot holes that experienced writers wouldn't leave, it also has very one-dimensional characters who just seem to follow a set of shallow rules to react to different situations. The plot progression and world-building don't flow well and are very unnatural, and what's even more unnatural, to me at least, is the character interactions, I have literally cringed at some of them I think it's a readable book if you're just starting out on reading web novels, but if you have any semblance of standards for these types of books or if you have read anything that's actually average in quality or above, then I would advise you to stay away from this. I hope this helps.