Look, I really do want to like this story. Yet it feels like reading this is more of chore than actual enjoyment. The characters, while not terrible, are rather unrealistic and samey. The plot itself is good! The premise has potential and could easily be something interesting. However, the execution falls flat due to the fact that plot points seem contrived and random with no real indicators of where the story is heading. Feels like I'm sitting in a car with a blindfold on.
Fantasy · Perverted_Fella
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Webnovel 
Look, I really do want to like this story. Yet it feels like reading this is more of chore than actual enjoyment. The characters, while not terrible, are rather unrealistic and samey. The plot itself is good! The premise has potential and could easily be something interesting. However, the execution falls flat due to the fact that plot points seem contrived and random with no real indicators of where the story is heading. Feels like I'm sitting in a car with a blindfold on.
Reincarnated With A Badluck System
Fantasy · Perverted_Fella