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Humility, it's what comes to my head when I see this comment, Author is humble, I wasn't going to read since people were roasting it(and I'm not a fan of vegeta), but since you are trying to get better, and after this show of humility I will give it a try.

Forgot to say that MC likes feet, he did suck a few toes.... And like getting controlled and nipple teased T-T...... Till chapter 46 he didn't let anyone finger his back hole yet. (Even if he likes to be controlled, he likes to control too.[img=recommend])

Everything I will say is just my opinion. (Author don't be discouraged, keep getting better and show all the haters, that you can do an amazing work, I hope to see more from you in the future) (ENGLISH IS NOT MY MAIN LANGUAGE) I've been forcing myself to read this fic, with a lot of hope that it's going to get better, but clearly it's not the case, author did say that it's hard to read the first volume, but I don't even know when it will end, and I just can't keep reading anymore, even if it is free, sadly it's not worth. Chapter 46 was the last one I read, the start of the fic was good, new powers, characters and plot, but it started getting worse, the things that make a good read is, characters, action (and powerups), history(plots), and the smut (it's okay to not have smut, but if there is, it should be good at least), and world building(?). (I will say what I remember in the order things happened) Everything is a mess, he awakens bound by Harley Quinn, get "saved" by Black Widow, get sucked, faints, awakens again this time in hospital, gets powers about sex and a power to upgrade and multiply everything, learns information eavesdroping Black Widow, then he says he wants to get stronger and live peacefully, then he goes home, remember that he is now poor, blames Ex-GF, didn't care about mom and sis when rich, blames Ex-Gf (again), tells mother and sis that he was rich and didn't help, and now is poor, mom forgive and supports her son, mom is poor, mom works a lot, I will take care of mom and sis, a wild Nick Fury appears, BW after sucking you knows that you have the power to save her, system doesn't let Fury analyse MC's powers, make's a deal for money,a better school for sis, and a junkyard, then go save BW, tell about a part of his powers, blames himself for telling about his powers without thinking, get attacked by a doctor, system allows doctor to secretly analyse MC's power(system hacked already?), use Q&Q to hurt doctor, change of personality, pin doctor in the ground, release doctor, ignores cooldown and use Q&Q again to upgrage healing potion, saves Selina and BW, sells information about a spy for a strip club, "Fury says that he will take care of it", then go home, get rich (donation from selina), sleep, next day, take sis to school, Xavier helps he remember about Ex-Gf, Blame Ex-Gf(again but with reason), heals Xavier(no wheelchair), date with sis, minor smut with sis(out of nowhere), enemies just appear and try to kidnap MC(new plot about MC being a lab rat), gets saved(by Emma), Emma gets beaten, sis gets beaten, Mc gets beaten, then he sees blood, has a change of personality, start seeing red, wakes in hospital (again), system had bugs, system reboot, 3 new powers (Dracul, void force, weapon master), starts to suspect system, no authority to learn things, start seeing red again, MC is vampire, needs to drink blood or will be in danger, rogue appears, sucks rogue blood, system says MC won't remember everything while seeing red, Rogue's like getting her blood sucked, bald walking Xavier arrives, rogue is put to sleep, gets Xavier help to remember what happened in date with sis, Xavier and MC saw MC in the memories using Void force, reader die bcs of cringe line, void power is not about void, but about flames, go home, smut in the bathroom with sis for 2 chaps (chap 17,18), bullshit about special first time, author says MC will lose V card chap 45, flashback (in dreams) about MC being a lab rat... I will stop here, from this point there is a lot of blue balling, random information dumped on us, mc mom is powerful, mc remembers about his grandma, then grandma can control her age and appear as a loli, mom is immortal, more vampires appear, mc seems to have a daughter that he doesn't remember (author made it seems like she got captured by the villains who tried to kidnap mc), there is a lot of weird things, new characters appear and disappear, chapter 45 mc doesn't lose his V card, chapter 46 I coudn't keep reading....