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It should be blue, red is EXPELIARMUS!
I decided not to try that one again. Still shaken I stand and approach one of the training dummies hanging from the ceiling, and take aim with my wand. "Stupefy!"
HP: I got Transmigrated into the World of Magic
Book&Literature · Kitamari
I hope the author's is not as small as these chapters.
ch 58 Harry Admits
Legacy of Harry Potter
Book&Literature · Graviele
Author, you are a (and I will write a continuation under the next chapter)
ch 53 Confrontation in Gryffindor Dorm
Legacy of Harry Potter
Book&Literature · Graviele
Oh, I also hope MC takes Alice Longbotom for himself. I remember in some ff she was colorfully described as: a tall, mature, black-haired, overweight beauty - a seductress. At the moment the author is making Frank an idiot, so I hope she leaves him.
ch 75 Punching Voldemort
Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
Book&Literature · Agwinz
I already forgot, someone remind me if there is a reason why Voldemort was resurrected so early? I remember that the Universe was slightly adjusted so that Nymphodora and Harry were the same age, but I thought that was all (And Dracula’s family).
ch 75 Punching Voldemort
Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
Book&Literature · Agwinz
It's all so stupid
ch 46 The Professor's Test
Harry Potter The Serpent
Book&Literature · Infinity_Weaver
Too chaotic and not enough context. I didn't like this style even if it was added for variety. Looks a lot like unnecessary filler.
ch 44 43: Cindy Moon: Brave? Agitated? Mad?
Marvel: I Need A New Body
Anime & Comics · Marveller
A continuation that the author forgot: As a skeptic, I want to say that you should not trust everything Dumbledore says and does. It is quite possible that after Voldemort's final death, you too will meet your death in some random way or leave the scene under the influence of love potions and then Dumbledore will remain the only surviving war hero and the person with the highest level of power in the country.
ch 54 Chapter 52 - A Treacherous Game of Chess (1)
[HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood
Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince
Awww (That was such a great moment! (Something like: “-I agree to tell you how I ended up in this timeline and I can swear on my magic. -And? -I died!” Then he might not have to pay)))
"I will send my house elf with the money in a few days," Harry told her. He didn't take her request seriously at all.
Harry Potter: Another Chance
Book&Literature · Krio_Genix
Is this filler or some kind of annotation? I've seen longer scrambled egg recipes!
ch 29 Chapter - 29 : Intrigue Part - 3
Harry Potter: Hero's adventure
Book&Literature · P_L_H
Well, the author clearly showed how to ruin an entire work in one paragraph. It would be better if the author did not lock them in the book space, but left them with the MC. I read a similar work, “Potter’s luck,” and although the quality of the writing was much worse, the author ruined everything in the same way.
- Emma, how about a little fun with our new companion? There's nothing to do here, so why don't we make the most of our time together?" Hela said, glancing at the blonde mutant with whom she'd long since hit it off.
Marvel's Harem for Harry
Book&Literature · SpaceMate
Such a board with these jokes and mockery in all HP works! However, everything is solved very simply! In this case, Severus stands up during dinner in the presence of the headmaster and professors and says: “I Severus Prince swear by mother magic that if a wand is simply pointed at me NOT during classes or official duels, that wand and the hand holding the wand will be completely destroyed before atoms by me personally, SO BE IT!”
ch 41 41) The Liquid Luck and I don't give a fu*k
Transmigrated into Severus Snape with Golden Trio back in Time
Book&Literature · Jerry153
Oh no, I didn’t hint that you were quitting your work, it’s just that, in my experience, many authors quit their good jobs for some reason and I’m preparing for the worst in advance) + after buying the apartment, Peter didn’t mention or remember the realtor, you forgot her ? That’s why I wrote such a comment to unobtrusively remind you that she exists and on cold lonely nights she often remembers a young, rich, sexy client!)
ch 96 PREPARING FOR 2ND DATE
Spider-Man 0X
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
This is kind of fucked up. The first 8 chapters are an information dump with a retelling of the book/movies with changes in the behavior of the characters. Although the whole point is that Dumbledore and many others are bastards. After chapter 9 there is some nonsense with the chronology of events. There is no linearity in the work! Here is the summer after the 4th year and suddenly again some kind of flashback from the summer of the 3rd year, but it was done extremely stiffly, stupidly, not beautifully, not understandably!
Harry Potter: Go To Hell
Book&Literature · LordSilvere