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Horrible. This is a global awakening type novel, so billions of people are teleported and a system communicates with them, which is a pretty common trope and I'm not against it. But the thing is MC doesn't awaken a talent like others, but instead gets a system. I simply cannot understand author's logic. There is already an EXISTING system all humans have, and there is also the talent awakening system, why can't you use the existing system but instead add an additional system? It adds absolutely nothing to the story aside from disappointment.

You are making story way worse by trying so hard. There is a good reason for so many similar novels to exist, because it works! Your starting template is similar to 'global lord' types, yet instead of following the fast paced formula, you write an extremely slow paced progression, which doesn't fit this sub-genre at all. Literally whenever ANYTHING happens, MC starts thinking about it for ungodly amount og paragraphs. Then he says something like "wait this is not important now", which I 100% agree, it is indeed not important in the slightest. And more importantly , MC feels WAY too clueless for someone who literally studied this world, this is not a transmigration novel. He even had high grades, how is he so flustered? In such an education system, he should already be completely familiar with everything and should be mentally prepared. I can tell that author is trying to make MC weak-willed so that he can change it afterwards and call it character progression, but it just doesn't work. The idea is cool, if you simply delete half of the text, or perhaps even a bit more than half, this could be a good novel.

His soul is damaged, which makes him act like a child with horrible temper. It completely changes at chapter 21-22, and he starts acting like an adult. It's supposed to be a plot twist, but many people can't read that far so spoiling it a bit

At chapter 22 he realizes that his soul was injured, and that's why he acted like a child, and was confused and had bad temper in general. At that chapter he immediately changes.

People are not saying that it gets better. Mc is like that for a lore reason. His soul is injured, so he act like a silly and confused child. Afterwards his personality drasticallh changes in an instant. It's not some vague after 20-30 chapters, but rather instantly at chapter 22.

I didn't understand your extra comment. he was forced to create a golden body, because his body was not strong enough for the golden bones, his flesh was disintegrating. What do you mean by looking cool?

First 40 episodes were interesting. Not outstanding, but I wasil into it, but after 40 there is no more translation, and mtl is hardly understandable, what a scam.

It's the translator rather than writer. There are 1873 chapters at the moment.