Translation is not good. Maybe more editing before you post the chapters. Good story so far. 馃憤
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ch 37 Chapter 37 Egg Yolk Crisp
Urban 路 The book shortage forced me to write
I get confused on the names of characters. Can you just keep the original names if this is a translation?
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Don't Mess with Me, You Can't Afford It!
General 路 Lemon Honey
Can鈥檛 wait for the wedding and married life of these two! Nice work!
ch 16 Chapter 16 Master of Metaphysics
History 路 Dumpling_Aunt
Story is nice and very fast paced. the only problem is the translation. Pls edit and check the sentences properly. Also in the last chapter it says the test showed twin boy and girl but this chapter they dont know the gender so it鈥檚 not matching.
ch 15 The twins arrival
Urban 路 flobabe9090
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ch 19 There Will Be A Time When She Cries
Fantasy 路 Shui Qingqing
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ch 267 More Gas Station
General 路 Bald Captain
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ch 28 A three step revenge
History 路 MITCHIEWilliams
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ch 101 Chapter 100: Jun Yichen's illness
Fantasy 路 LittleRabbit1111
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ch 0 1 On the way to Civil Affairs Bureau
Urban 路 tanu_sam
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ch 238 Whole Family of Monsters!
General 路 Mr. Yan
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ch 17 Chapter 17! Hello, mom!
Urban 路 call_me_mirror
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ch 127 True Essence of Acting
Urban 路 Shui Qingqing
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ch 213 Taking Out The Mask~
General 路 Mr. Yan
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ch 145 Baby's Full Moon Party
General 路 Bald Captain
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ch 150 Are You Really Selling Your Child?
Urban 路 Slightly Attractive
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ch 43 Repaying the Favor
General 路 JQK
I like the story so far but I agree that it needs a proper editor. If the one volunteering to check this story鈥檚 grammar is willing, I would recommend for the author to let him do so. It is a very interesting plot.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 : I鈥檓 Back to the Past
Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman
General 路 ZerahNeko