gulu_gulu666

1yr

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The plot and storyline is good, although the writing style to messy to read. please fix that matters again. the rest is good. well, good job author.

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gulu_gulu666

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please make the sentences more tidy so that readers can read them comfortably :3

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gulu_gulu666

1yr

Posted

good plot, good writing too. The introduction between the characters is also good, the rest just need to pay attention to grammar. good job author.

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Urban · Karisma_5815

gulu_gulu666

1yr

Commented

the names sounds foreign :3

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To Kiss An Idol

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

gulu_gulu666

1yr

Posted

turns out to be a romantic story between an older woman and a young man! The love between a famous idol and an ordinary woman is really interesting! I've added it to the library and will continue reading it again.

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Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

gulu_gulu666

1yr

Commented

hi!

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To Kiss An Idol

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

gulu_gulu666

1yr

Posted

Sejauh ini bagus! Meski awalnya agak bertele-tele, tapi cukup bisa dinikmati~ Faerie, peri yang nyasar ke dunia novel~~~ Semoga kamu bisa menyelesaikan kontrak!

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