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2yr

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Enjoyed the novel so far. Will the entity of pride help in managing the harem as I believe in order to manage a harem you need to be a bit on the dominant side or else the whole harem will walk over you and you will become a simp(most Japanese isekais). Will there be devil fruits ? If there is, will it have gomu gomu no mi with mc not knowing it is hito hito no mi model Nika. Just a silly thought

ch 77 Tangle.

My unhelpful system in Naruto

Anime & Comics · DaoistAmr

Ba_La

2yr

Commented

Artermis or Haruhime as it helps building MC character and his own views. Thought about hestia but little hesitant it first may cause it to be weird with loki, hephaestus or other gods and their families mostly Freya. So building with a mortal or the fox girl or having a good partner such as artermis and her family may be good start.

ch 0 -8 Lemon?

In Danmachi with Plasmids

Anime & Comics · Abadom

Ba_La

2yr

Replied to kurit_kun

It is just the spider sense works against lala(chapter 34) but it is not a big deal as it is not exactly a plot hole.

ch 75 Nice Karen

The Wandering of an Unstuck Stepbro: Multiverse Travel

Anime & Comics · kurit_kun

Ba_La

2yr

Commented

There is a little plot hole with spider sense in the previous chapter but I believe it senses the surroundings of incoming danger so it includes friendly fire but in mcu it was little different. And there is also a chapter where lala tried to shoot him with the gum gun, his sister tried to punch him but it failed so not that option. But the Karen acting weird may have broken him. And also the kenboushoukou haki also has awareness over limits as in one-piece. So it may be better to convert or take that into account in future chapters, or adding the device that block spider senses to create comedy gigs.

ch 75 Nice Karen

The Wandering of an Unstuck Stepbro: Multiverse Travel

Anime & Comics · kurit_kun

Ba_La

2yr

Replied to Ba_La

Yep

In Danmachi with Plasmids

Anime & Comics · Abadom

Ba_La

2yr

Replied to Alyan

I think you have seen some shi##y novels(pokemon like fmc or mc to be exact) try some of this novels (/legend of ling tian/ like novels where fmc is developed over time and actually have some character) and this fanfiction has been a good memorable and wonderful journey so far so give it a try.

ch 66 On the roof

The Wandering of an Unstuck Stepbro: Multiverse Travel

Anime & Comics · kurit_kun

Ba_La

2yr

Commented

Thank you.

ch 136 End of the sports festival

My Hero Academia: The customizer

Anime & Comics · overloaded_maxima

Ba_La

2yr

Posted

No beta mc=> check No cruel psycho Mc => check No collectable but sensible harem => check No cringes=> check MC with brains and brains =>check Unique=> check What more do you need for now.

In Danmachi with Plasmids

Anime & Comics · Abadom

Ba_La

2yr

Commented

Kurit-kun you are a genius

ch 49 The new beginning

The Wandering of an Unstuck Stepbro: Multiverse Travel

Anime & Comics · kurit_kun

Ba_La

2yr

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The Wandering of an Unstuck Stepbro: Multiverse Travel

Anime & Comics · kurit_kun

Ba_La

2yr

Commented

all three at the same time. Being a king and not having a harem is kinda contradicting plus leading them by a nose and crushing their feelings makes it look like a jerk. And the whole hesitation is a problem as when did gilgamesh hesitate.

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King of Heroes' Rise

Anime & Comics · FLEWKEY

Ba_La

2yr

Posted

Eren is a good character in this story and although the Kyoto faction seems to be good, it would be good if he re-discoveres himself in the new world as the whole faction is something that is like survey corps recap and i believe he himself will find pitting himself against the Kyoto faction if it contradicts his beliefs of freedom as faction as whole is same as eldian or Marley and it might also be a bit cringed if he just finds kunou as a daughter as I believe he just killed about hundreds of children in Marley attack arc and although I know it is fanfic and some plots must be forced I belive this fanfic will be one of hype as the aot series is just airing and this fanfic will have huge potential. (But please don't make him a simp and the story cringed). But all I want to say is until now it is the best.