He's not Wolverine. This isn't marvel comics.
ch 31 You're Not Indra!
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
Have a bunch of experience with people who have amnesia and are rescuing someone they know that was captured as prisoners of war eh?
ch 31 You're Not Indra!
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
Just a bit of constructive criticism, but you gotta work on expressing your ideas about the story. You keep repeating the same thing over and over again, but with different words. I don't need to read 3 times about how Destiny Day is super important for everyone cause it determines their future. I got that the first time. It gets frustrating for the reader when in every chapter you repeat the same information in 3 different ways. 1, it makes it seem like you're trying to use filler to make the story more robust. 2, it can also make it seem like you're treating the readers like we're idiots.
ch 0 8 Destiny day
Fantasy · Yonaas
Slaughter for sin points woooooo!
ch 24 [Bonus chapter] Chapter 24 – Drunk
Fantasy · MarudameOssan
Sounds good and all until he gets tortured to death over and over and over again. Eventually his mental will break and he will become useless.
ch 0 1 Chapter 16: Absolute Recovery For The Hero!
Games · Zelvron1604
Yea he wasn't but he was known cause of his sister. He also made himself look weak on purpose in every time-line.
But he was so weak before! How is he so much stronger in this timeline!?
Games · Zelvron1604
Time for some character growth and a reality check.
ch 63 A Mighty Being
Fantasy · Bad_Bishop
His secretary can die horribly with him later on. Would be fitting.
ch 29 First Gate
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
I'm ok with the Vampire Queen. Feels bad to watch her go through character progression and be a good woman to him and not get rewarded.
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Fantasy · AnathaShesha
I don't understand a single thing that you wrote.
ch 0 9 The Battle Harem System 3
Fantasy · Yinghuo_392
Alex tries killing Malachi and it unleashes the beast. Woooo
ch 18 Reasons
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
I feel a little bad for Maria.
ch 80 Chapter 78: When you disagree, take a break!
Fantasy · Chestnutriceeee
I think there was a typo in the author comment. *3 more cliff hangers left* XD
ch 325 Chapter 325. Heartbeat.
Fantasy · Mortrexo
SIMP
ch 0 9 The Battle Harem System 3
Fantasy · Yinghuo_392
Your book is far better than alot of other novels. Writing just like everything else takes practice. You know those cool trick shot videos that make you amazed. What you never see is the hours of fails it took for them to succeed. Same with reading a good book. You never see the hours of failed novels the author wrote before to get to novel you are reading. Keep up the good work.
ch 79 Lisa & Valerie.
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
is it implying that the story/destiny of a martial spirit would impact their holder's story/destiny?
ch 58 Dual Martial Spirit?!
Systemless Villain
Eastern · abinn