the fuck does this mean?
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Fantasy · Blazuku
i think it would sound better to just say "but others"
Of course, Holies often go here and there, some of them subsequently achieve Transcendence and ascend to the Higher Dimensional Worlds, but some of them remain in that stage until the end of their lifespans.
Fantasy · Trafford
he's not wrong, this is just too cliche, i can tell you how's gonna end.
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Games · Alekzi
pretty good, easily arguable statements, but a decent view of life imo
ch 0 8 [Auxiliary Chapter] Old Book: Escape The circles
Fantasy · Aero182
he was probably bullied as a kid
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Fantasy · Aero182
Italian tv conductor Antonella Clerici
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Fantasy · RinoZ
it seems very cool, the MC's powers are very interesting and the relationships it has so far(chp 40) are enjoyable in my opinion. One weak point I found is world-building and the fact that the protagonist's magical spells and powers aren't really explained. I think the story has great potential, even if it's harem. keep up the good work!!
Devouring Monarch: Rebirth of the Profane Phoenix
Fantasy · TheDragonSlayer