Brayado_Seg - Profile

Is it me or is introducing yuri into stories with the harem label becoming a kind of epidemic? There are already several stories that I dropped for that very reason. (google translate)

Everything was going well, until the protagonist allowed himself to be publicly humiliated in front of all the possible love interests for the character of Serafall Leviathan, first by doing nothing about the sexual harassment he suffered by undressing him in front of everyone and second by letting her dress him. like a magical girl, although she is supposed to have several ways to avoid that or even show resistance, for God's sake, the protagonist is supposed to be modeled after DC's Lucifer Morningstar, and in previous chapters the model affected him greatly. less, this by showing how proud Lucifer can be of not letting other devils see him below him, this even taking into account that he is still a child, but with the level of an ultimate. (Google translator)

I'm going through chapter 349, for the moment the story is progressing well, the only bad thing I would see would be the large amount of drama that there is and what the protagonist does, that together with the chapters that show the diary of a scientist who is part of of the story, those chapters tend to be somewhat redundant, since they show irrelevant information, that is, I think it could have been summarized more, so that that part of the story does not occupy so many chapters and becomes somewhat boring to read. For the rest, the world background is very well done, since the author explains in detail how the world works, the levels of power, in addition to the explanation of things like where missingno comes from, etc. Not counting the excellent and fun interactions between humans and pokemon. (google translator)

Author, I honestly don't know if what you're doing with most of the fanfics you've done is legal, putting the recent chapters on patreon without the possibility of seeing them normally, I think you're already infringing copyright laws. (google translator)