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This story was very promising in the beginning. I really liked the MC and ML. They were both awkward with each other for different reasons. she because she just entered her host and he was married to her due to unfortunate circumstances. Also, the original host didn't like him. The romance was nice, if non-existent for the most part. I liked this because they were getting to know each other as individuals before they were thinking about each other in terms of husband and wife. It's a very slow burn. The family members were very vibrant and unique, even if a little frustrating at time. Especially, the ML's father and the extended family. They really had me gritting my teeth. The MC family were not far behind in annoyance. Sure, her family sometimes came off as cliche in their actions but you could see the logic in their actions. like you knew what was motivating them to act that way. They weren't doing it for plot sake but because that was what was driving the character. But then the mass released happened last month as the quality went super down, on so many aspects that it feels like it's not the same author.For one, the translation is bad. And I mean in comparison to the first chapters. In the beginning, there were like two or three errors in every five or so chapters. They were spread out and not usually in the same one. Now the errors are on every chapter. The pronouns keep switching and the names of some characters, too. What made me drop the novel though was the new writing style. it doesn't feel the same. it feels too one dimensional, like it was written via AI. Just flat. No personality or depth to the new characters. And even the MC and ML feel weird. I can't truly explain it. But this is it for me.

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The first part sounds awkward and I don't know if this is because they used Shao Yunduan for the name. He's an Editor or Primus, yet here he's one of the Six Advanced Scholars and he had three wives accompanied him??? I thought he had one and that was Qiao?

Shao Yunduan, as one of the six Advanced Scholars who had recently joined Hanlin Academy, had three wives accompanying him. Madame Zhou and Madame Han, the new wives of the officials, harbored strong hostility towards Qiao Xuan. Although they were not well-acquainted with each other, this shared sentiment brought them closer, engrossed in their own conversations and laughter. Their disdain for Qiao Xuan only deepened.

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Springtime Farming: A Happy Wife At Home

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I thought it was editor Shao?

Additionally, Emperor Xuan pointed to the memorial and ordered someone to summon Strategist Shao from the Hanlin Academy. He intended to personally interrogate him.

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Springtime Farming: A Happy Wife At Home

General · Yiyi Lanxi

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Madame Lady Qiao. They even said her correct name in the last two paragraphs.

Madame Yuezheng displayed a hint of displeasure as she forced a smile. "I was merely making a remark, but you take it so seriously. That's not the kind of fortune I was referring to. I believe the news has already reached your ears?"

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Springtime Farming: A Happy Wife At Home

General · Yiyi Lanxi

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return the money? I thought they were collecting money from him

Qiao Xuan's smile persisted. "What about you? Do you want us to return the money to you at Hanlin Academy, or to the Qiao Family? Or perhaps you would like to report us to the governmental office?"

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Springtime Farming: A Happy Wife At Home

General · Yiyi Lanxi

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engagement? they were talking about Shao right? he's married and a son in law. why would they be talking about his engagement? unless they were talking about someone else.

In the end, they consoled themselves with a thought. "He is fortunate not to have become an official. If he were to achieve that position, he would meet an untimely demise without ever realizing how it happened. Besides, we severed the engagement with him long ago!"

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Springtime Farming: A Happy Wife At Home

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Oh, snap! When did Madame Yuezheng arrive?! This should be Madame Qiao.

Madame Yuezheng and the others expressed caution and disgust. "Don't even entertain such thoughts!"

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General · Yiyi Lanxi

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Wow, these typos have increased lately, or is it just me? "He" instead of she since Hongxi is male.

She kept cursing inwardly - she had not checked the almanac today, so why did she run into this strange couple?

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Springtime Farming: A Happy Wife At Home

General · Yiyi Lanxi

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Square pacifier...? I only know of a pacifier that you give babies to suck on and I pretty much doubt this is what this guy is wearing on his head.

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Qiao Hongxi was dressed in a bamboo-green Confucian robe, donning a square pacifier on his head, and holding a folding fan in his hand, adhering to the standard attire for scholars. However, they knew that they had no connections to noble families and that the Qiao Family was facing financial difficulties.

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Springtime Farming: A Happy Wife At Home

General · Yiyi Lanxi

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Oh, is Qiao Xuan also taking the exam? LOL. I think they meant Shao.

Qiao Xuan understood that she needed to maintain her composure and focus solely on answering the examination questions.

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General · Yiyi Lanxi

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"she" saw her.

Her condition improved slightly, but her body was weakening. Fatigue had taken its toll, leaving her lacking energy and frayed nerves. Qiao Xuan was taken aback the next time he saw her.

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Springtime Farming: A Happy Wife At Home

General · Yiyi Lanxi

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When did Qiao Xuan drink? I think you meant "he might wake up feeling unwell or dizzy after having too much to drink..." Unless you meant she would feel dizzy from using her powers???

Qiao Xuan had worried that she might wake up feeling unwell or dizzy after having too much to drink the previous night. However, she felt perfectly fine—no discomfort at all.

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Springtime Farming: A Happy Wife At Home

General · Yiyi Lanxi

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I don't get this. Am I missing something? Because it sounds to me like Madame Tang and Qiao Xuan were supposed to be a couple...? lol. Like meant to be a mother in law and daughter in law?

When Shao Yunduan heard about Qiao Xuan spending time with Madame Tang in the middle of the night, he believed that Qiao Xuan and Madame Tang were meant to be together.

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Springtime Farming: A Happy Wife At Home

General · Yiyi Lanxi

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I laughed at this one. There is a role reversal! Shao Yunduan is the wife of the Provincial Champion! LOL. No, for real, they switched the characters. It was supposed to be "Shao Yunduan" showing concern for "her", "Qiao Xuan" smiled.

Seeing Qiao Xuan's concern for him, he smiled. "Darling, don't worry. I will go alone. I want to see what they are up to. I will take good care of myself. Remember, I am the wife of the Provincial Champion, and they wouldn't dare lay a finger on me!"

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