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I read until ch 25 or something. It can be a better story if Author write about what happened in the plot. For me, too much time skip at the beginning of the story isn't a good decision. The story become boring because suddenly Mc have a lot of rare item and prop, strong pokemon and other things without any content or plot about how mc got his things. 1. I don't understand the goal of the MC. In the start, the story kinda tragic with the dead of mc pokemon, but after that MC have a slice of life story without any purpose. 2. The system give too much reward without any drawback, Mc can easily got a legendary pokemon egg, rare item and other props just from daily sign in. Then author never write about the situation or how mc got the reward. Especially about system coin, after timeskip he just suddenly got more than 100k poin. His system even have a territory type kingdom building function. 3. Even after 25ch, the story just full of time skip and summary about what happen at that time. No plot, background story or chara development. Like suddenly Mc already have a good relation with Gym leader and Elesa fall for Mc without any reason. No training, battle, breeding or bonding with his pokemon. The only battle that author write is between Mc and Cynthia. 4. Mc almost never used his own reward from the system(only some good item for himself). he give it to other people for free, for example a hisuian growlite, zapdos egg, some mega evolution stone, adamantium and vibranium mine and other things.

For me this ff takes Annihilation Maker too far. From a nobody that never train or having a mana then suddenly creating Bast, Tom and Jerry etc. Not to mention Mc suddenly able to summon Super Shenron. Sacredgear have limitation, especially in their base form. The idea is pretty good, but maybe the chatgpt just to much nonsense. The story jump from one plot to another without any bridge between the plot, so the ff kinda lack and lost some part of the story. Author need to add something himself so the story can be more acceptable

Not that bad, but author Nerf Mc and the characters. With the power of all of their chara, they should be the strongest already, not to mention that OP power level isn't that high compared to other Series. Even in the later part Author too lazy to write about the chara that they get and the percentage of their chara. The story is Mc oriented. He fight all of the opponents and author write that fights, but for other SHP author just summarize their fights. So the story kinda boring. Not bad, but not good either. If the power scaling is done right, this ff will be better

Good ff, but too much drama for me. For me, the main genre of this ff is Drama, not comedy or slice of life. Almost each chapter full of inner conflict of each chara or the drama between chara. In one part mc full of fighting spirit, but after that he became depressed, on the other part two chara fight because they don't understand each other. This ff is really good, each chara have their own portions and theirs growth can be seen. This is a pure drama romance about building a harem, no system or other cheat. After reading around 80ch, mc still ignorant, have no real goal or purpose (unlike other harem seeking protag), just reading and learning.

Not bad but boring, there's no goal for mc or the system. The interaction kinda bland, like natsu and lucy or rias and issei, they come but nothing happen. As an owner, mc just hiring people but didn't care about his hotel, he wake up late and didn't give enough service in the morning, his hotel isn't safe enough (shelly died and nazuna attacked) and other things. his hotel connected to different world but he don't care about timeline, timezone or anything else, so if something happen mc will be like "oh sorry, i don't pay attention about that" I remember watching anime about something like isekai cafe, mc goal is to introduce Japanese food and drink to isekai people. So, if Author can give some goal to mc in this ff, and give more interaction with different people, this ff will be better.