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First off the story is well written and has a very interesting way of being told tell. But, sigh I am sad why does every story that has a really cool premise always have a main character surrounded by tons of misunderstandings. It’s never oh they gain cool powers or a awesome patron now let’s get started they always gain a bad rep. People think poorly of them and they have to hide their abilities though admittedly sometimes for good reason. So personally I am just tired of the use of that trope if that doesn’t bother you it’s a good story so far as I have read and maybe I’ll return once I am less exhausted by the constant misunderstanding story device.

Hiding all but the first handful of chapters behind a paywall disheartening and possibly illegal. It’s a very interesting concept but looking ahead and seeing how it’s only on patreon makes not only me turn away from it but will likely turn away many readers who would have been willing to pay for a few chapters in advance. If you’re making the money you want from doing it this way good for you I suppose but a much wider audience could be reached to pay for your writing by posting it freely then charging for advanced chapters.

Hope to see it return it was such a good story, very unique as well.

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Quick add on I get that I stopped pretty early so if it truly does get better I may be convinced to pick it back up and change/delete my review.

Finished Ch.14 before review I liked the beginning and what lead to the world change but personally I just didn’t like how constantly tortured the MC was. I get bottom most rung and rising to power but he just seems so utterly useless that other than wanting revenge there doesn’t seem to be any reason for him to be chosen as a demon king candidate. There is nothing to make me want to keep reading, nothing to make me be engrossed by the MC and their story, and no promise to more power anytime soon. Besides that’s my opinion clearly you can believe differently but just know that at least for the first 14-15 chapters it’s rough to get through if it gets any better.

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I completely agree with you on all fronts, it is amazing.

Amazing!!!!!!! I have read a lot and this is one of the best i have ever seen. Absolutly in my top ten. I love everything about it especially the main premise of the story.