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This is just my rambling so feel free to ignore me especially since his Haki is only to organ level and not cells but it made me think if haki iis Willpower he could totally make his own version of Jenova ccells by infusing haki into them and control people that share his cells DNA

I've been checking daily for this, I'm way to hyped for this duel there's something special about Kaiba getting owned weather it's a female version or not.

Hey I'm not sure if it'd be taboo or something but it would be interesting to make a sentient cursed weapon or something like the Demon weapons from soul eater and it can have the cursed ability of resonance allowing one to fight beyond their means as long as they can match cursed energy wavelengths

I think Personally he'd be a dual class Luke how semiramis is caster/ assasian he'd be Beast/Ruler

Ik the chapters are written in advance and Orion doesn't care about how the rings are used but a good way of regulating them is to only produce a set amount and distribute them to certain people or schools. Then Orion could allow people to rent them not buy them so that way he keeps making money off of them and they can keep track of who has the rings

I can only say she got you a ring...she's a keeper that's hella based

I mean depends patreon is good because it allows usually early access and even if you don't get consistent donations a bunch of people donating for a single month is better than none but if you do I'd set up resonable prices.

Ah ok it was real confusing I was like who's Jaba I was picturing the guy from star wars. But his name is Scopper Gaban

I typically don't read stories until they have more chapters so I can read them in one go but this concept kinda interested me. I've been getting into Honkai/Hoyoverse through fanfics, and Danmachi is pretty good base for xover fanfic material. I'm interested to see where this story goes.

It seems like he forgot that it said in his legend his wife and Daughter Die. He is literally playing into the hands of fate while claiming he's trying to avert it.

This story is pretty good tbh I'm kinda expecting him to go the Zeref route and eventually make his own demons and then become a world class threat spoken about in whispers

Ok ngl that life point line went hard af felt like it was lifted from the anime actually got me slightly hyped. Nice job bro, also that ring sounds really nice I have a hard time picturing it because my imagination sucks but it sounds like you put a lot of thought into it.

Came back to check for an update and cringed because it said woth instead of with...really love mobile sometimes

I mean if you wrote the chapter already why don't you just upload the rest here before dropping

Yes a proper duel woth cards that actually fit their decks and not the garbage that the anime uses

So what I'm hearing is you're too damaged from snusnu and now have more time to write it seems your significant other is on our side it was a honey trap of the highest level

I mean cool, eye powers are always cool bit it seems a bit strange for it to just happen like this I don't know. It just feels kinda random there wasn't any foreshadowing of this besides giving him an adaptive body in chapter 2 but I never thought it'd lead to this.

Hot dang Alvin just said sit down little boy