This is something that just felt off but you should put - at the end of skin just to have it look 'completed'. Great chapter though!
Awakenings- Mortal: Blood, Bone marrow, Internal organs, Reproductive system, Skin
Anime & Comics · Saeko_Kaburagi
You need to rework this entire paragraph to have female pronouns.
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Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
right*
As she looked into his eyes, all she saw was someone that was already dead, devoid of any hope to live. Without any further words, she made blood gauntlets on her righ hand, and plunged two of the clawed fingers into his skull, causing bits of his brains and blood to come out of it.
Anime & Comics · The_Fae_Child
OD*
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Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
...an* outpost...
"I've found and outpost belonging to one of them by interrogating one of their Clansmen. Now, since their is a decent amount of them, I'm planning on gatheirng all four of us to deal with them." Jörmungandr explained.
Anime & Comics · Kingkillerdj2023
"*Can I..."
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Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
"*Imagine that..."
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Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
her*
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Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
Knight*
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Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
'*In case...'
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Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
"*Oh, right..."
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Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
"*No kidding,"
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Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
"*Pretending to..."
Pretending to be nonchalant is getting harder and harder," Samus complained to herself, feeling as if the soap operas had lied to her.
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
regretting*
The gathered armies caused such a scene as had not been seen in the world for an age. Atlas sighed, almost regrating his foreknowledge of the results of the battle – almost.
Video Games · Didiodo
him*
Despite the seemingly calm atmosphere, Varian's instincts told nim the threat was real and could materialize at any moment. He was sure that they were already outside the residence scouting.
Video Games · RealDarkSeraph
...come* back...
SS4D will be lead by you from now on so don't you disappoint me or I might count back from the dead.
Video Games · RealDarkSeraph
...his* daughter...
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Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse
"...a stroke."*
Samus Aran's Journey Through the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Sir_Traverse