wait, isn't this one available on meganovel as well? is the author contracted to both?
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - Gravis
Eastern 路 Warmaisach
I do revise it. It's just that some mistakes will slip by no matter how many times you edit it.
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Fantasy 路 Dmanga_lover
thank you very much 馃檹
Glad you liked it!
Thanks for the review!
The MC is way too realistic 馃ぃ
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Games 路 HeartlessDaemon
this guy is a giga incel despite being so young
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never ask "what could go wrong?"
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lol
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lol
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lol
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Games 路 HeartlessDaemon
well, that was fast....
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Games 路 HeartlessDaemon
what about family? You know, the people you're supposed to love unconditionally?
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Games 路 HeartlessDaemon
Ok, this was fun, but the writing leaves a lot to be desired. A lot of details are missing which makes it impossible to immerse in the story. The plot is obviously a SAO parody, which is fine, put the potential is lost because of the writing. I recommend you read more professionally edited works instead of the webnovels with horrible grammar and sentence structure. You'll also need to work on your English a little more.
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Where did this come from?
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Games 路 HeartlessDaemon
yeah it was one with a similar title that's all.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - Gravis
Lightning Is the Only Way
Eastern 路 Warmaisach