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Great book and great ending. I enjoyed the development of the characters and how all the major characters each had a good ending. One major surprise and I loved it is how mc died as hitler and then went back to his previous body in the new world he helped create.

The story was okay at first but when author gets to chapter 150 or so starts using ai completely ruined the novel for me and not most of the chapters are like a Chinese light novel explaining stuff just in details none stop. A lot of authors are using so and it’s ruining their stories please stop using it and write it your self. I love the beginning of the story but it now another great book ruined by ai book writing.

This is a great book to read and I enjoyed following the main character on his journey. One thing I think that would of made this book better is more in depth fight scenes towards the end of the book. When I started to read chapter 500 the story telling got real bad because it was a part when the author told storie of 2 S.C.T soldier clearing a part of the city and the fight scene was quote ( 1 and 2 were shot a zombie and more zombies came out but 1 and 2 were not afraid because they were trained and the shot at zombies bravely and with courage to make the city safe they cleared the zombies and were tired but happy) this is a crappy example but when you made a 2 to 3 chapters talking about the experience of the soldiers clearing the city I would want more details and not just rushed chapter with none of the great story telling the author did from beginning to 400th chapters that was written. I loved this book and I can wait for more updates from your other series.

There little thought going to make the background of the character. The story plot is rushed and this story could of made 100 or more chapters if there was more effort put in to it. Besides that this was a amazing fanfiction which got inspiration from different sources such as Roman, 40k warhammer, and other historical things from the past of the earth’s history. I loved it one of the better stories on Webnovel but if you do better you can make an amazing story worth 5 stars and would love to read more books from you. This is me trying to give you constructive criticism so hope you don’t take offense to this and keep up the amazing work as the author!