A little yes but I did eventually drop this one. Story went a direction I personally didn’t care for but to each their own
ch 15 Her Life, Her Experience and Her Hate
Sci-fi · Exallion
Me to I think they meant to say is such a win but they put whim as in whimsical
Being Level 19 in such a whim… Now I am only around 17k EXP off getting to Level 20! Maybe I can get the rest by cooking a lot!
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
Martial arts not marshelarts is this a a wild west story
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Fantasy · Xero_5825
When did he gain shapeshifting
"Found one!" Ben claimed that before he used shapeshifting to shrink his size to that of a normal mosquito, he flew in a certain direction faster than any human eye could track.
Fantasy · Xero_5825
I notice you repeat paragraphs at times let’s not do this to increase word count in a chapter it’s cheap and lazy
The constant blood needles hit their mark, one by one, until finally a last attack served through the beetle's neck, ending its life for good.
Fantasy · Xero_5825
Since this story is over a year old and the grammar is still not fixed I will pass on reading this one. If you care about your story edit your work and make it best you can. Almost every sentence is messed up. Going from his/him to her or their. Changing perspectives mid paragraph. Random grammatical errors everywhere
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
Fantasy · victoralr
Play all day to get my moneys worth
Still, I should play all day in able to make my money's worth.
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Why do you keep saying hard work money. Hard earned money would sound more natural to English speakers.
Today is his birthday, February 20, 2025. Since he just turned 25 today Leo hopes to enjoy himself slightly by spending all his hard work money.
Fantasy · Master_OfDao
Hope frequency of updates improves soon
ch 1025 Chapter 1025 Returning Home with a New Companion
Fantasy · MegaC
When it hits 50 chapters I’ll read it thanks
Got any of them new chapters for me
ch 943 942. Unexpected Message
Fantasy · Arkusar
Some of them he didn’t even
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Fantasy · Alexcj
You pretty much repeated the sentence about the smell liking someone from lack of oxygen. Just increases word count without adding to the story in any way
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Fantasy · Alexcj
Did he ever make the sword for the craftsman guild or turn in the beehive crystals to the adventures guild
ch 95 Melissa
Spending My Retirement In A Game
Games · DiceVR