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Warlordofchaos

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I am given you a 1 star because there are way too many flashbacks in this story, they have halted any advancement of the story and make what’s been said so far confusing

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Is Vali male or female because you switch back and forth so much that it’s confusing. Here let me help for males it is: He, Him, His, His, Himself. For females it is: She, Her, Her, Hers, Herself. Please try to improve this because it is maddening to read it sometimes.

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That is not true example Beware My Power by SpecterOfFire, great story and he did not let the villains monologue and also tell why you fail if you let them do so. A battle field is not a place for words it’s a place of action if you want words hold a debate.

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Why do you feel the need for the MC to let the villain to monologue. The MC killed an evil dragon with out breaking a sweat. Kokabiel is not a stepping stone or temporary distraction from boredom he is a *#*t smear on the bottom of his shoe. Please don’t let the bad guys monologue your writing talent can be better used on how the MC destroys said MC.

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Option 1 please with a side of fries thank you very much

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Not all dark elves are evil. Drow are evil the run the gambit just like every one else.

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