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Actually Cedric, Fred, and George should be starting their third year at Hogwarts school when Harry Potter starts as a first year. Cedric Diggory was in his seventh year during the goblet of fire book when Harry was in his fourth year so there are two years till cannon starts.

I like the story so far but you tend to periodically put the wrong names in like with Mrs. Norris replacing Mr. Filch. If you double check the names before posting. If you are using a translator program you will cut down on a lot of mistakes if you translate each sentence individually and compare it to the version you get for each paragraph.

Found a typo as 6 times 2 equals 12 not 14. You also keep calling the medicine toilet water and that is clearly wrong.

If you want to treat it like a game he needs an inventory/storage space like most games have to remove the rotting issue. Most people don't like to eat maggots so hunters have to either smoke the butchered meat, or salt it to keep it from spoiling.

Pompeii I think is how it is spelled would be an interesting choice for a city if you want to have a volcano in the territory that could possibly have live dragons living there.

Thanks for the new chapters and I am looking forward to the effect taking Hephaestus to either his territory or Hogwarts will have on those that know she is a returned goddess.

Thanks for the chapter. the way you described the new substitution skill he should have been able to swap the explosion tag with a rock or something instead of letting his wife die. The reserection jutsu all either need to have someone else transfer their own life force into the person when they have the full corps and only recently died like was used to save gara or that impure world one that is basically just temporary zombie pupets that continue to drain the castors chakra to summon. I don't think there were any other resurection techniques.

Thank you for the chapter and glad your continuing this great story.

Found a typo you said he woke up at 5am and exercised till 7am but claimed he spent three hours training before school.

Hope you are doing alrigh...

Are you alright? It has been a month since the last update and we have not heard any notice if you are doing fine or not.

Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter! Since you seem to plan to pair your MC with the three main girls in his class you could have Naruto date the daughter of the ramen restaurant. Sasake could date either Karin Uzumaki which would be funny as it makes Naruto his cousin by marriage eventually or one of the other sound kunoichi.

Where is the chapter for yesterday? You said the releases would be every other day but forgot to publish yesterday but we have not heard anything from you yet. Are you alright?

With the chakra couples pairing in the academy introduced in this novel I wonder how this could change the life of Rock Lee since like the MC was before starting his new life Lee was originally well known to be a physical training beast in school. It would be interesting to see if he was able to be a popular guy with women even wearing spandex with a bowl hair cut under the new world setting.

Thank you for the novel chapters so far love the new story. What is the planed update schedule for this novel?

I think you meant best Ron at the end of the chapter.

Cleansing Spell used for cleaning himself, a targeted item, or an area. This could be a cleric's or the Sage's magic either works. Figured I would offer it as a life style enhancement spell.