Badges 12
Moments 664
now that is a Constructive Criticism 馃槑
-聽I am open to constructive criticism but not disrespect.
The Transmigrated Author
Fantasy 路 zowji
honestly, I would've preferred if he softened up to the sister, slowly.. instead of full on apologizing for something he didn't do. He should've slowly changed to a caring brother, at least it would seem more natural, compared to the 'oneday hatefull and distancing brother, SUDDENLY turn a full 180 become caring.. straight outta nowhere. That just throws me off, and it should throw the sister off too, infact, she should've become suspicious of him
ch 0 5 Volume I - Chapter 4: Changed Brother
The Extra of The Lunerra
Fantasy 路 WindskyW
he knows the room.. plus he's in denial too 馃槀 This would be a normal reaction.. amongst others
Who... Who am I? Although... Where am I really in the first place? There's no way I'm really in the game, right?
The Extra of The Lunerra
Fantasy 路 WindskyW
yup, it's a drop for me too..
With a graceful swish, a large, bird-like form of golden light emerged from my body and made its way into Zeph's. I watched my son with mixed emotions, whispering, "I hope you have a good life, my son."
Transmigrated as a Fat villain: All heroines are after me
Fantasy 路 A4KL
I swear, he better cut off their familial relationship after he gets what he needs! garbage like her are only baggage
"Son, you are..." I began to say, overwhelmed with pride afterall he was not useless.
Transmigrated as a Fat villain: All heroines are after me
Fantasy 路 A4KL
doesn't change the fact that she's still ruthless enough to do it
She cleverly utilized a bandit ambush, one she had arranged herself, to accomplish this.
Transmigrated as a Fat villain: All heroines are after me
Fantasy 路 A4KL
true that 馃槀馃槀
ch 10 Parting From Home
Extra Pages: The Author's Odyssey
Fantasy 路 Ink_Weaver122
wait so does MC have the memories of the Extra's life before he took over?
"Did I ever tell you about the time I tried to bake a cake from scratch and ended up with a charcoal brick?" I quipped, trying to lighten the mood.
Extra Pages: The Author's Odyssey
Fantasy 路 Ink_Weaver122
Power of Hopes & Dreams 馃ぃ馃ぃ馃槀馃槀
My father clasped my shoulder, his grip firm. "Remember, son, that you carry the legacy of DarkHeart with you. Let it guide you."
Extra Pages: The Author's Odyssey
Fantasy 路 Ink_Weaver122
who TF is that?
They also revealed the reasons why all of them came here. It's Because of Demon. They destroyed their old home and now their target is Earth.
Extra Pages: The Author's Odyssey
Fantasy 路 Ink_Weaver122
I'm also trying to figure out how TF he even thought of that! they're not even in the same location yet they are connected. yet the author couldn't state a clear cut reason why the mc specifically assumed that the seed is the cause of the coma kids awakening. Honestly bad writing 馃槥
how is it less powerful?
Garen had a feeling that after he became stronger, he could definitely travel through the River of Time and even head to the past and future.
Dragon of Time Control
Fantasy 路 Tangsong Yuanming Qing
馃ぃ馃ぃ
However, after hesitating for a few seconds, White Dragon Mother put down her dragon wings, closed her eyes, and fell asleep.
Dragon of Time Control
Fantasy 路 Tangsong Yuanming Qing
now that's flexing
An adult Time Dragon had the qualifications to speak to the gods equally.
Dragon of Time Control
Fantasy 路 Tangsong Yuanming Qing
goodness.. I like that analogy 馃槀馃槀馃槀 and I absolutely agree 馃憤馃憤
he can be killed tho .. he just has longevity that's all
His path to immortality had just begun. He was unwilling to take such a huge risk when he was weak.
The Mage of Eternity
Eastern 路 Calm Down
I'm disappointed too, but you read the paragraph wrong.. he rubbed his head not beard XD, which is why you assumed he's an old man
ch 0 1 How Tiring Is It To Accept A Disciple...
I See the Aura of the Great Emperor in All My Disciples
Eastern 路 Don't Let Me Stay Up All Night
really? wow, usually foundation establishment cultivators are just junior or senior disciples in other wuxia novels. guess MC is currently around small sects
No matter what, Foundation Establishment cultivators were the backbone of many cultivation sects.
Following a Hundred Years of Cultivation, I'm dying Before I Got Cheats
Eastern 路 West Traveler
extraordinary bearing? how? from what?
Elder Zheng saw that Han Zhao had an extraordinary bearing and was not an ordinary person. However, his clothes were not luxurious. Clearly, he was not from a big family in the inner city, so he might not be able to afford the Flying Cloud Saber, so he reminded him kindly.
Life Simulation: Add Tags Starting with Wellness Technique
Eastern 路 Midnight Beast