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Except you can read two chapters, regardless of length, each day by watching an ad. Personally, I just despise the splitting of chapters because it screws up the pace and feeling of the story. Imagine a movie being cut into 3 parts and then only watching a couple of them one day, and the last part the next day. It matters less for people who are batch reading, but it is still a pain. Especially for free readers who can only use 2-3 free passes a day. It used to be that only trashy Mary Sue novels with a cold CEO male lead had chapters as shirt as the current standard split chapters. You can't get a good plot going in such a short chapter. Though longer, split chapters still suffer from the issues mentioned before.

What especially bugs me about his use of the mystic arts is that it basically renders the "spider" part of his identity irelavent. He just teleports where he needs to go. No need for swinging. Same with tying people up. Why use webs when you can use mystic arts to bind people? Even super strength isn't just spider related when he use super serums and more. I have no clue why he keeps on calling himself spider-man when basically the only things that identify him as such are his suit and spider-sense, and the number of abilities that he has that are NOT spider-man related are huge.

I would disagree with you. There is no middle ground on killing a women's children. Either she hates you forever or she didn't like her kids in the first place. If it's the latter, then he did not make her pay at all. If she isn't pained by the loss, then it's not a loss. And to be blunt, you failed to even remotely make her look like it pained her to lose them. At most, she seemed like her pride was hurt a bit, which isn't remotely enough to make things equal between them. Also, you made her too disgusting personality wise for most people to like the MC even being allied with her, let alone that there are too many vibes of her joining his harem later. Aside from trying to use her descendants in political marriage to end things (something I personally despise) and her trashy personality, you even had her considering whether to kill or have her men r*pe the owner of the place they were trespassing on. They are devils. It fits. That doesn't make them likable, nor does it make readers happy to see the MC on their side. Of course, maybe you fixed things later in the story. I stopped reading for a while after the MC started acting like a scumbag due to the temporary personality shift, as I wanted to wait for when that arc ended.

Uhh. . no, that's not alright. It's outright illegal. Fanfics are legal so long as you don't earn money off them and you add something creative to the overall story (can't copy the story with nothing but a different MC, despite some doing so). Patreon is a grey zone because it's optional, and all the content is eventually available for free. So it can be said that it's just people donating to the author (even if it's not totally true). However, the moment it's locked entirely behind Patreon, and never released for free, it can't even remotely be claimed to be in a grey area. It's just illegal. I highly encourage everyone to report any such patreon and make a DMCA claim against them.