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Good quality writing but the world this is set in isn't very detailed so far at first 20 chapters at least. After jumping from lvl 50 to lvl 600 in 2-3 chapters I pretty much lost interest in the story. Normal player characters are still in the 30-40 range at this point which makes this so ridiculous. OP character stories can be fun but in order to be so you have to go about it in a special way so that the audience doesn't get bored. The concept is here, but it needs so much more refinement to be enjoyable enough to keep reading for me. Would have much preferred the story to keep the MC's level gap much close say in the 15-20 range? Far enough ahead that in most games you would be completely incomparable to other characters. Like what is the MC going to do when he finally leaves his starting area? Instantly clear the entire game? Would have been way more enjoyable to see him beat like a weaker but still op boss. That way content later down the road seems actually interesting.

From one of my favorite author on the site, this new novel has got me hooked! From the published chapters so far it would appear this story is off to a far better start than Forty Millenniums of Cultivation which had a bit of a rocky start before it really hit the ground running. With how well FMC does with world building, even if its decently ripped of of warhammer, I imagine this world to be full of interesting stories to tell. Would recommend to any new people to translated novels.