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Dude even your summary has shit grammar

Alright I have read up to chapter 133 and bot is this one big joke. An otherwise good plotline is ruined by the authors complete lack of understanding in romance, he just includes his little anime fantasies he wishes he had. These girls are acting braindead during a fucking tournament because they want his attention and compete against each other instead of acting serious. It’s hella annoyimg how they become complete simps without any objectives or personalities. If you want to write hentai do it, if you want to write a serious novel do that instead why are you mixing them? If you wanted a novel you shouldnt have done a harem, kf you wanted a romance its possible but not this forced brainless garnage.

Alright I have read up to chapter 133 and bot is this one big joke. An otherwise good plotline is ruined by the authors complete lack of understanding in romance, he just includes his little anime fantasies he wishes he had. These girls are acting braindead during a fucking tournament because they want his attention and compete against each other instead of acting serious. It’s hella annoyimg how they become complete simps without any objectives or personalities. If you want to write hentai do it, if you want to write a serious novel do that instead why are you mixing them? If you wanted a novel you shouldnt have done a harem, if you wanted a romance its possible but not this forced brainless garnage.

Only if you are a virgin simp

I look forward to reading it in the future when I stopped reading it, it was probably one of my favorite novels, I want to binge it again.

I originally thought MC was too forgiving which made it a drag to read but as of chapter 193 I changed my mind based on the story and got more into it, but the story iupdates too slow so I dont’ even read it anymore

Yeah I read that, but the way he's writing seems to be contradicting that. life lesson for you kid, not everyone means what they say.

I really do like the story, but the writing has made this novel very questionable. The author decides to bring religion in to this (Not made up but actual religion from irl) and he states he wants to being Judaism into it for how ot can help the story and how he has no bias, bit this turns out to be a complete lie. In a few of the chapters he mentions how Jews are struggling to live in Jerusalem and how Palestine and all the Muslim countries are out to kill them but this is simply false. First off, to anyone who has read the news about this area, would easily be able to find out that Isarel has control over Palestinian and are attacking civilians and forcing them to move with violence. Palestinians are under threat by Israeli forces and not the other way around. Also many Muslim countries have good relations with Isarel and have struck deals benefiting Israel. There shouldn't be any reason to claim all muslim countries want to kill Jews because that's just made up by the author. It's not difficult to find this info so unless the author decided to write without any knowledge of the area it only seems possible he's doing this intentionally to put Muslims in a negative light. I have nothing against talking about religion but racism and lying about a group of people to make them look bad is not acceptable.