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I always thought the MC's interest in Maki was a little forced, until now I didn't really understand it, it could just be me, I don't know. I hope to understand in the next chapters. Other than that, the story is very good.

My author friend, I can say that I've been following the story for a long time, it's the most consistent naruto fanfic I've ever had the pleasure of reading, thank you for your time and dedication to this story, please continue, I'll be here.

I was thinking, why can't Fujin find a way to “ask” Hiruzen for the Razengan? it would be a perfect justification, and he would learn in a “cool” way.

The dialogues between Fujin and Hiruzen are the best thing about this story, I really liked it.😂

You could make cursed energy toxic to psychics in a way that makes sense.

That was a very solid chapter of development, congratulations. Looking forward to seeing what Peter does and how his powers and personality mature. 👍🏻

Are the names changed? Female name in male and male in female?🤔

Welcome back. This split personality thing never goes well, just a word of advice, it has spoiled many stories.

The MC is already op, what's that for?, when the character gets so much stronger that everything he can face loses the fun, I would take things slower, but that's just my opinion.

I read some chapters, but I confess that it didn't hold me very much, it could be because I didn't watch Modern Family.🤔

I read it listening to the music... it's been a while since I've been moved by a reading. Thanks for this author.

Reminded me of Desolate Era 🤔

I have a doubt, is Harry Parseltongue? If it's somewhere in the story I forgot, if anyone knows please remind me.

I don't like the MC's development path, it's not bad, I just don't like it personally. The fanfic is really good. I recommend it, but I'm stopping here, good luck author.👍🏻