The constant back and forth between past- and present tense makes it really hard to read and follow the story. Author, if you ever find the time (and energy) to proofread and update your chapters, it would make the reading experience so much more pleasant.
ch 12 Chapter 12 Victory
Sci-fi · Aoki_Aku
Looking forward to see Jake continue to shine and get his well deserved accolades by his peers. I know he really just wants to crawl into a hole because of his shyness, but I like it when he gets a confidende boost.[img=recommend]
ch 1146 V3 ch380 Banquet (3)
Sports · half_empty
She's gotten so used to lying that it has almost become pathological.
ch 140 I Won't Lie For You
Urban · Mcllorycat
Jonas has a very misplaced feeling of survivor's guilt and is not thinking straight at all. His selfishness will surely ruin everything and then he'll victimize himself even more afterwards when the one who'll lose the most is Jenna. Tch tch, what a selfish and childish twin.
ch 60 I Still Think This Is A Terrible Idea
Urban · Mcllorycat
So much love for Mcllorycat's novels.❤️
ch 0 9 The Most Fun I've Had All Year
Urban · Mcllorycat
Dear author, you've mistaken 'beta' and 'omega'. The reason why 'beta' should be "ordinary people" is because it's the second letter in the Greek alphabet, thus number two after 'alpha', which is the first letter. 'Omega' on the other hand is the very last letter in the alphabet, which is why it has become the designated letter for weak characters and contrasts with 'alpha'.
ch 0 -1 To New Readers
Sci-fi · Treein
Finally, a novel where the roles are reversed!😂👍🏻
The difference was that Song Rui rubbed his waist several times when he left, whereas Qin Xiaoyao was very lively and her face was filled with expressions of love and passion.
General · Cutting the Squabble
A perfect example of what it means to play someone like a fiddle. Well done, Niaoniao.😂
ch 36 Remember This Lesson
General · Large Fruit
Scene -->: Yuchi Xiu reminds his lord that he needs to stay chasted, which doesn't sit well with Wei Ting but nevertheless he stops whatever he's about to (perhaps) do. Later in the night, Wei Ting snatches Xiaoxiao's blanket, thus Xiaoxiao is subconsciously forced to seek warmth with Wei Ting because she feels cold. Result -->: Close and intimate (but innocent) body-to-body contact. Wei Ting, you naughty dog. What a hypocrite little tsundere.😂
ch 200 Breaking the Rule of Abstinence
General · Pian Fangfang
It's an excellent novel with an interesting storyline and well-written characters, but I have to say that the translation is rather subpar and even gets progressively worse in the latter half of the novel with a lack of proofreading which doesn't do the author's work justice.
After Her Divorce, She Escaped With A Strong Man To Farm
General · Drunk Consort