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3mth

Replied to Fersuremaybe_k

It's not wrong. The author alternates between present and past tense in the novel. Every sentence should be past tense.

He lives near the vegetable market, and around this time, the number of people coming to buy and sell vegetables tends to increase.

I Attained Invincibility In The Real World

Eastern · The Flying Iron Palm

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3mth

Commented

Please keep the workout details vague! This whole gym experience seems incredibly unbelievable to me. No way a personal trainer gives advice and behaves like that.

ch 0 5 Chapter 5 Buying Groceries and Improving Strength

I Attained Invincibility In The Real World

Eastern · The Flying Iron Palm

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3mth

Commented

lived*, tended*

He lives near the vegetable market, and around this time, the number of people coming to buy and sell vegetables tends to increase.

I Attained Invincibility In The Real World

Eastern · The Flying Iron Palm

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7mth

Replied to yesyesyesyesnonono

Why does webnovel remove paragraphs?? Makes it way less legible. There was supposed to be a paragraph, where there is currently a missing space.

ch 0 7 Rescue From Prison

My Sword Intent Can Be Infinitely Improved

Eastern · Writing For Ten Years

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8mth

Posted

Not a bad novel for webnovel standards. I had to drop it though because I really can't warm up to the main character. He is an absolute simp/creep and a lot of stuff is way to cringe for my taste.

MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God

Games · Raj_Shah_7152

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8mth

Commented

I hate this pseudo science

ch 51 Basics Of Mana Class

MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God

Games · Raj_Shah_7152

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9mth

Posted

It's a mess. It has horrible grammar, even for webnovel "standards". It also reads like something that is written by an elementary school kid.Author is too cheap to get a proofreader or fix any errors.This is especially disappointing since the premise of the story (even though it's not even original) seems like the kind of thing I would enjoy.Also makes one wonder about the 4 stars in writing quality. Are there so many fake reviews or are people on webnovel just so numb to this kind of grammar/bad story writing?

Armipotent

Fantasy · HotIce

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1yr

Commented

Why is everyone so negative? I think the story is quite nice so far, especially compared to other stories on webnovel. Also doesn't feel like a huge info dump or anything.

ch 0 3 Dungeon

Odyssey of the Blind God

Fantasy · HideousGrain

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1yr

Commented

ch 11 Vice Sect Leader Of The Heretic Cult

I Stayed At Home For A Century, When I Emerged I Was Invincible

Eastern · Half a clear breeze

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1yr

Commented

This sounds horribly unnatural because of the "by the way". It should also end with a '?' since it is a question.

"Thank you I will take you up on your hospitality, by the way is your dad some kind of traveler or something."

Transmigrated as a Ghost

Fantasy · MegaC

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2yr

Posted

"I heard he is only 17 years old now." "Yes, he is only 15 years old now" - this great novel. This novel is truly a mess. Everything is inconsistent.... names, power systems, numbers. Some paragraphs just get randomly repeated. It feels like the author just put 3 random different novels together. ~1-70 rune system, which completely disappears after that and never even gets mentioned again (as do all the characters we get to know up to that point, including his fated partner and sworn loyal servant). Then ~70-350 beast system, with exp and levelling for killing. And after that he gives up all his beasts for a mission and basically starts all over again with a different kind of beast system again and leaves behind all characters from the mid part as well. Never seen such a mess before. Definitely not worth spending any money on.

Shock! The Spell Is In English!

Fantasy · Soy Sauce San

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