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females are witches. males are wizards

Although Hermione is a young wizard from an ordinary family, and her understanding of the wizarding world is very narrow and one-sided, it does not mean that she does not have the most basic judgment. Hermione could be sure that this young wizard of Solim, who was the same age as her was definitely the best of the entire first-year students.

Harry Potter:  The illegitimate child

Harry Potter: The illegitimate child

Book&Literature · Dragonel23

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weasly

"Gryffindor is full of mischievous imps, the Wiesly twins are quite popular, and there's always a lot of noise in the common room, so you don't want to take a good look at your homework there. Of course, if you're completely resistant to outside interference, then it doesn't matter."

Harry Potter:  The illegitimate child

Harry Potter: The illegitimate child

Book&Literature · Dragonel23

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a suggestion. I think you should substitute "magical riot" with accidental magic instead so it isnt weird to the english readers since you are translating to english. magical riot just feels weird to read when most are more accustomed to the term accidental magic.

Neville shuddered as he opened the box, knowing that he had never confiscated any gifts since he was a child. His toad was one, one from his uncle to celebrate his magical riot, and every candy wrapper given by Mother St. Mungo's every time he went to St. Mungo's. He has never received such a valuable item as a wand since he was a child, and he can really feel the care of the "little monster" in front of him in the mouth of his uncles and the reliable and responsible cousin in the mouth of his grandmother.

Harry Potter:  The illegitimate child

Harry Potter: The illegitimate child

Book&Literature · Dragonel23

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grammar and spelling mistakes*

However, Solim knew that they could not be blamed for this, after all, the brothers were from the same school before Solim came to Hogwarts. The gifted little kids of a pure-blooded family like theirs would go to that so-called Sculler School within a week of the Magical Riot. Then, starting at the age of seven, he was subjected to the Heart Piercing Curse and the Imperius Curse once a month. Although the people who cast the spell are all unknown to the outside world, the degree of spell casting is the minimum that the young wizards can bear. But think about it, the little wizards over the age of seven in this school have to be tortured twice a month, how can a person with such an experience still be a normal person? And as you get older, the power of the Imperius and Imperius Curses increases, and there is an additional punishment for young wizards who do not break free from the Imperius Curse within the allotted time or do not recover from the torture of the Emperius Curse within the allotted time.

Harry Potter:  The illegitimate child

Harry Potter: The illegitimate child

Book&Literature · Dragonel23

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i really hope the grammar improves.. heart piercing curse? empirius? im sure its the cruciatus and imperious. The empirius mistake is especially hard to overlook when it was typed correctly not long ago.

However, Solim knew that they could not be blamed for this, after all, the brothers were from the same school before Solim came to Hogwarts. The gifted little kids of a pure-blooded family like theirs would go to that so-called Sculler School within a week of the Magical Riot. Then, starting at the age of seven, he was subjected to the Heart Piercing Curse and the Imperius Curse once a month. Although the people who cast the spell are all unknown to the outside world, the degree of spell casting is the minimum that the young wizards can bear. But think about it, the little wizards over the age of seven in this school have to be tortured twice a month, how can a person with such an experience still be a normal person? And as you get older, the power of the Imperius and Imperius Curses increases, and there is an additional punishment for young wizards who do not break free from the Imperius Curse within the allotted time or do not recover from the torture of the Emperius Curse within the allotted time.

Harry Potter:  The illegitimate child

Harry Potter: The illegitimate child

Book&Literature · Dragonel23

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it was stated that he is an illegitimate child. Basically his father had cheated on his wife(married and rightful wife) with the main character's mother, who was killed.

Solim has two older brothers and a younger sister, both of whom are the children of the legitimate Lady Selwyn. The eldest brother Dax is a young man full of violence, the second brother Sabiantis is a lifeless stuffy, and the youngest sister Syrna can basically be confirmed to be a squib. In pure-blood families, nine-year-old children who haven't had a magical riot are basically Squibs.

Harry Potter:  The illegitimate child

Harry Potter: The illegitimate child

Book&Literature · Dragonel23

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i agree for the first point. as for the magic system? it depends on which one he chooses. in dxd human magic system is far more complicated. but for the devils, its based off imagination. for harry potter, the spell casting system is wand movements, and spell name. though i see silent and wandless casting in a lot of fanfics. i think the only really hard part of the harry potter system is learning all the other things, such as runes, arithmancy, alchemy and potions. if you wanted to be an inventor of magic and magical items i think these would be the most complicated ones

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i agree. midoriya first year is when nejire is in 3rd year. so cannon can't possibly have started yet simply because nejire is in our main character's middle school meaning she should be in the final year of middle school at best right now. it was also stated out MC was 14 or 15 years old so he too should be in the final year so he wouldn't be in 2nd year but 3rd.

'With this, it should be easy to get to UA. Since my brother is a canon character and younger than me, then the canon would start the next year. No, around this time, Midoriya should meet All Might and then the former will work to get into UA. Meaning I'd be in my 2nd year when it happens.'

In MHA With a Dimensional Trading Quirk

In MHA With a Dimensional Trading Quirk

Anime & Comics · blazuki

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this torture and self reflection arc is quite dragged out. I get that the author is trying to do some character building through this but at the same time, its being mentioned in multiple chapters with the MC using different methods and that gets a bit old.

I had to live with the fact that I resorted to torturing a man for the rest of my life. No amount of goodness could redempt me from that. I had to come to terms with it, and move on, aiming to always be better than the previous day.

A Pokemon in BNHA?!

A Pokemon in BNHA?!

Anime & Comics · manny0101

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agreed. twice not only copies himself, but also others, replicating their quirks as well. and he can do it infinitely making him such a huge threat. the drawbacks is only the mental instability that had the copies wanting to kill the original since they are the "real one"

As he spoke, the number three Henry split into two more, their chests bearing the numbers fourteen and fifteen, respectively. His Quirk allowed him to divide into as many as a hundred nearly identical copies of himself, and thanks to his costume having tiny microlenses sewn into the panel on the chest, it automatically updated to show how many he had activated at any given time. At least when he had the function active.

BNHA: Singularity

BNHA: Singularity

Anime & Comics · Einlion

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