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These opening chapters were garbage. I'm going to forget about them and move on from the problems created.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Pleasant dinner
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Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry
He would need to be a bandit if these areas have law enforcement. He murdered a bunch of people while escaping. Even if he's in a different kingdom now they would sell him back pretty easily. I don't see that guy not caring anymore.
In fact, he has acted as an adventurer, as while traveling he has done many tasks given to him by the people of the villages he passes through, this has made his reputation grow to a certain extent, as he always accomplishes the assigned tasks quickly and efficiently.
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Aldril, on the other hand, is calm, open-minded, kind and humorous, but that doesn't mean you should provoke him, if you are kind to him, he will be kind to you.
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I think continuing to run away until you've escaped is the best course of action when you're in an escaping rapist's body. Instead of going all John Wick on them like they killed your dog. Maybe don't execute them one by one and then whine about how you can't go back to that town.
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Dude, you can at least catch your breath lol. You won't stop being a man if you aren't completely unaffected by a wolf pack attack.
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You wrote this needlessly weird and creepy.
"Actually we have come here to do something for you." Charles replied.
An Osmosian in Marvel (MCU Fanfiction)
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
Yeah genius. This is what you should be thinking about with him possibly in your head.
Taking in their appearances I noticed both Storm and the professor look like their actors from the revised timeline films that came out after 'Days of Future Past' instead of those from the original timeline films.
An Osmosian in Marvel (MCU Fanfiction)
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
Why would he do that if he's right next to him? It would be better to speak it aloud.
A moment after this happened I notice two people out of the corner of my right eye. Hoping it was not who I thought it was.
An Osmosian in Marvel (MCU Fanfiction)
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
... Huh?
"I told you I saw him! And he seems different, not as dull as before!" Alena huffed, slightly annoyed. Her previous mention of Robert had been ignored, but now, the unnoticed fool had become the celebrated eating champion, stirring some jealousy in her.
Superman's Saiyan little brother
Anime & Comics · INIT
5.3 lol
Chapter 4: Robert Stands at 1.61 Meters (Edited)
Superman's Saiyan little brother
Anime & Comics · INIT
5.3 lol
Chapter 4: Robert Stands at 1.61 Meters (Edited)
Superman's Saiyan little brother
Anime & Comics · INIT
Cool. I'll check it out.
(A/N: Not in a Might Guy-like manner, but in-all-fours, and with the hands at the front. Like a dog, for example)
Sussy Baka in MHA
Anime & Comics · The_Synonym
Thank you
(A/N: I made the training based on how Shaolin Monks train... Those guys are real try-hards when it comes to training...
Sussy Baka in MHA
Anime & Comics · The_Synonym
The MC is telling his shadow clone to be careful climbing a tree. Was he not supposed to seem dumb for that? I'm shocked my first comment doesn't explain itself really.
"Get down before you hurt yourself," Kobaru yelled at the clone already perched on his branch of choice.
Train. Eat. Repeat. (A Naruto Fanfic)
Anime & Comics · ANewBiz
And besides, surely it wasn't anything bad, right? I'm sure they were just playing around or something.
Sussy Baka in MHA
Anime & Comics · The_Synonym
What movie was this?
(A/N: I made the training based on how Shaolin Monks train... Those guys are real try-hards when it comes to training...
Sussy Baka in MHA
Anime & Comics · The_Synonym
Source?
(A/N: Not in a Might Guy-like manner, but in-all-fours, and with the hands at the front. Like a dog, for example)
Sussy Baka in MHA
Anime & Comics · The_Synonym
That's kind of neat. Glasses can be plastic or metal or have strings to catch them from falling or rubbery to prevent snapping. Etc. No reason his quirk can't give him a good spacesuit.
After answering that without thinking too much about it, soon I heard my teacher mutter in a low voice "That's you as a hero...?", before eventually seeing him look at me weirdly for a second.
Sussy Baka in MHA
Anime & Comics · The_Synonym
Don't read the first 2 chapters. Those chapters cause problems while not needing to be read. It's not awkward to start at the third chapter imo. 4, 4, 2, 2, 4. Story development and character design could rate a point higher without the first couple of chapters.
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