Munchy - Profile

it started okay but got very very bad. from inconsistent chapters to time skips to incomprehensible fast paced storytelling. we're told the MC is training a certain technique and just learned it to all of a sudden him having a trump card technique that's stronger than the one he was training in. chapters that are repeated or skipped and the "author" doesn't even try to fix it. then there's chapters from other novels. a lot of chapters first half are the second half of the previous chapter. imagine 10 chapters where the first half is the second half of the previous chapter. you just read 5 chapters but paid for 10. all In all this novel sucks and the total lack of respect and follow through on checking from the author makes this a waste of time to read

The story feels like a bunch of clichés stringed together. It's confusing sometimes because it feels like the author is working on one storyline remembers a cliche and shoves it into the story.

This story is so trashy. I'm sick of the constant boob talk. This is a grown ass man who constantly talks about the boobs of his students or any woman he comes across. The disgusting grooming that's happening between himself and his female disciples is worrying. Also he only cares about his female disciples. The male disciples are never the focus. I legit forgot who one of the male disciples was until they talked about his problem. this story seems to be written by an incel who wants to treat women like trash or non existing and expects them to fall in love with him.

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