Multiverse traveler (hp , mcu , pokemon)

LV 13

funmaxwell

The main character gets seven wishes in chapter 1 and there are grammar mistakes all over the place and in some parts of the story the grammar is so bad it's unreadable. I also didn't make it past chapter 1. I also find it weird that there are no other reviews mentioning this. so in my opinion it's probably the other reviews are either fake or the people who wrote them are so in love with the idea of this story they can't see how badly it's written and then there's the possibility they're just trying to be nice.

LV 4

aiden_rivera

noice man not my cup of tea but the writing and everything there in top notch man keep doing what your doing man , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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LV 4

Adan_Perez_8892

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