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The Bloody Angel

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Author: listen_moon

4.57 (27 ratings)

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"Princess plz spare my life and I will tell you each and every........".He begged but this princess or should I say 'crown princess ' was not giving a sh*t about it.
Slash, slash, slash
"Dear king father, I am sorry but I am left with no choice ". She wiped off blood from her sword and eyelids as she killed them with her eyes closed.

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If your thinking that it's a typical love story with a Prince Charming and pretty princess, then dear you're wrong.

A story with a savage princess who hates herself and egoistic werewolf Alpha. One is "The Bloody Angel " while the other is "silver wolf ".Both against destiny . But let's see how universe is gonna play with them!!

What was witnessed by three year old, Dazel that made her hate herself?????

**Cover page is not mine. Credits to the owner **.
Am a newbie so what are you guys doing?? "support me"
Kidding plz review and leave comments.



Um, guys a few ch were like appearing off ,so I have updated those plz enjoy and comment.

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Mel_Aniv

The story potential is high. The narration is splendid, the pacing and character designs are outstanding. World building is well thought, though the only problem is you need to roughly edit the Chaps. Dialogues are sometimes not starting with capital letters. The punctuations are misused and there are unnecessary spacings sometimes. Making me to pity the story as the potential is great. Write more and don't be discouraged, I know you will improve in one or two years time. Here's five stars to brighten up your mood. ✨

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foxyash

This story is so interesting 😸😸😸 loved the characters....the author has done great job. The characters and plotline is so strong and well defined....it has a great potential to go forward. Great Work!

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geewintG

The story has potential. Armed with great world background and story progression, it will draw in readers, however, I did come across mishaps in the first few chapters. It includes the need of proper punctuation and was lacking spaces in areas, but it can be done with editing. Readers can try it out. Great job, author.

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swarnadeepsaha2005

Pretty good I should say. The plot is good and the writing quality is also good. I love this kinds of stories. I can see the authors passion from reading it.

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Ariel_x

Interestingly, this is not out normal princess and the beast kind of romance. It is a new picture of romance entirely that will give you chills. It is a very intriguing novel that I will recommend to everyone. Please do add to your respected libraries. Thank you!

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Cloudthief

It's a beyond interesting concept with good world-building, characters, and story-development. Only problem I have is the quality of the writing. The vocabulary is great, It's just the diction which doesn't poke me right. If the author fixes those small mistakes then I bet this story could become a great one! All the best luck to your author!

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chimychimes

quite nice I must say, you got a way with words.* whisper* the bloody angel. that really sent a chilling sensation down my spine, not forgetting the synopsis. the alphas are here...

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Sumayya_Riaz

Nice story🌿🌿🌿👍keep it up!👍 It is fantasy so I choose to go over it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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TitanMaster

This is definitely an entertaining read for fantasy nerds like myself. the world itself is enticing and the story makes you not want to stop.

2yr
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Fritziest

Good plot, although I felt like some parts are rushed. It has nice taste of character traits. Awesome work right there despite some of the flaws I spotted.

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WyattJaymes54

This story is amazing. The worldbuilding is amazing. The sentences seem to make sense and leave me wanting more. The storyline is good but it lacks emotion. All in all, a good read. I definitely recommend this story to all fantasy lovers

2yr
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Kuroyasha404

The world building and character designs are good. However I felt that the pacing was really rushed at some places and few scenes were not clearly described.

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SilverNexusPendrag

The idea and premise of the story is a great one. The idea of a kingdom having such a ritual in order to choose a crown prince/princess is in many way like those in old Norse or even that of Rome where only the act of suffering can one become strong enough to lead. However I only have one thing negative to say and that is the story is moving too fast as it feels like its on fast forward,

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listen_moon

Author here guys, I have figured out lack of proper punctuation, grammatical errors and rushed dialogues. Will give my best to give error less work. Thanks

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Ultimatedaywriter

I like the premise, there aren't as many chapters as I would like back in weight. Everyone likes psycho royalty. As for the characters, I did like them.

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Knossos

Writing quality brings this novel low. OP really needs to go over his writing with a spell check. Please, this would help make the novel look better. The description is a bit sleazy, but that's okay. Keep up the good work.

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guyfawkes

There's a lot I liked about this novel. The character descriptions are vivid. This novelist has a real ability to make you "feel" what the characters are experiencing. I thought the plot was entertaining and well-paced as well. The only point off would be in some of the grammar and spelling early on. But for me, that didn't make me enjoy the story any less.

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ghjgyugf

you won't find a better fantasy thriller novel the narration is good the story is captivating and can easily understood few things were messing up the story but the writer fixed those so overall a good read nice work author

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fifyfd

the writer has done awesome work, the story and narration both at their best, the chapter has a few grammatical mistakes but it doesn't make any big effect on the story that are been improved in the further chapters good work author

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Shamira_Farhath

Wow, wonderful imagination. The characters are well defined . The world background is good and intersting. Please do keep up your good work. Great thinking.

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