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A man reawakens in a cell across from some well known individuals in a movie/comic world.
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Write a reviewRandomly adds The Flash which makes zero sense and just three the entire story into nonense. Just forced and ruined the story.... fix the title if you are going to have a DC/Marvel fanfic. Never read/found a fic where both universes actually worked or was completed. Just a waste of reading the first 17 chapters.
You first got my curiosity now you have my full attension.................................................................... keep up the good work
I'm a bit weirded out because you can't see those haters commonly seen in every novel. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค
Whelp, at first I thought this story was amazing. And it was, at first, in the begging but then the story became worse and worse. And the bad writing quality does not help either.
would have been a great story if not for the freaking harem. sucks to see so much potential going down the drain,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
It was very good but author needed conflict. He made it be making Mc forget stuf. All this drama could have been avoided. Mc randomly discovered that he cant use full power and had to die to remake his body. Stalling tactic by author to create bad situation for Mc to fix...
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This is epic!!!! I've only red a few chapters but I love it already. I also love how he made his own starlabs and watchtower, can't wait for other references from DC or something else. Keep it up Author, ur the best๐ฆพ๐ฆพ.....
๐ถ'๐น๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ฉ๐ฒ ๐๐ช๐ผ ๐ป๐จ๐บ๐๐ฒ๐ฅ ๐ต๐, ๐ ๐ก๐๐ ๐ฏ๐๐ฟ ๐ตย ๐น๐๐ฟ๐๐ฒ, ๐ ๐ก๐๐ ๐ฏ๐๐ฟ ๐ฒ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ง๐ฟ๐ ๐๐ถ๐ฃ, ๐ฎ ๐ป๐จ๐บ๐๐ฒ๐ฅ ๐ณ, ๐๐ช๐ผ ๐ป๐จ๐บ๐๐ฒ๐ฅ ๐ฐ๐ฑ๐ฆ, ๐ผ๐ก๐ฒ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ต๐๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ฒ, ๐๐ป๐ ๐ย ๐๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ด๐ย ๐ฆ๐ผ๐๐ฎ.
Reveal SpoilerThe story and the idea behind it was actually the best Iโve seen compared to others on this app. The story development was excellent and overall was very good, but thatโs really only until like chapter 55 I think? where he came back after his death. After that I donโt really see how the story can continue to maintain the good trend and you can tell itโs starting to deteriorate because it has harem. Itโs not like Iโm hating on it because I donโt like when thereโs harem in the story or anything, but the authors trying too hard to please the fans or what not and starts to forget to make the characters feel like an actual character and just start throwing them into the harem and making the story predictable from a mile away.
This novel need exposure one of the best novel I have read on this platform I won't be explaining the novel but will suggest to have a read you won't be disappointed.
Nice dude, one of the best marvel fan fiction. Keep it up and don't dropped.........................................................................................................................
Awesome start! I like that you have made your group go their own way. I like that you are putting a proper plan together for the future which gives you so many options story wise. keep it up.
Great start man. I love the team. It is pretty op. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..
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This novel is rubbish no introduction no clarification on the setting and no explanation on the the protagonist's power, yeah he is a vilsomething but lots of readers won't no what it is, and don't get me started on the character he is empty he has no soul no essence to speak of all that metahuman stuff was clearly copied from other novels and the supporting characters had no introductions no description no real interaction with the protagonist yeah they talked but there no true emotions.
Author Ashtin_Pratt
The beginning is a little rush is better to take it slow. Also don't make every girl to immediately fall love with the mc. But so far the fanfiction got potential.