/ Fantasy / Walking to the abyss
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"Nothing happens without a reason...... Nor a price to pay".
_A broken soul was brought into a world full of blood and conflicts, the last book she had read before her death.
about war between two kingdoms, Grathesia and Qouthridor.
Both armies could possess dark magic in different ways, and most of the main characters were fighting under brain control magic.
And as a result, destruction was the only destiny .
even though knowing the plot, that didn't really get her out of danger, because she never knew what the story really ended with.
...................
as she woke up in the body of unknown character.
a kid, with crimson eyes and silver hair, certainly not a common appearance.
Despite being reborn as a slave,
She was avoided by people around her as they whispered about "the curse of her eyes"
.................
" sigh, so I can't even understand their language huh"
However there was certainly a great danger if she had stayed in that mansion,
And surviving wasn't really an easy wish.
...............
Wandering around helpless to be a victim of "puppetry experiment ", to possess a long forgotten demon,
To be part of the great war.
Experiencing humans greed over and over again,
That's how this little soul took her steps to the darkness, to take her revenge from 'humans'
....................."And this time, I will be the cause of the next destruction "...........
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Keep up the good work you got an interesting story going on. [img=recommend] your writing and they way you described is good and everything looks very clean and has a good vibe too .
The plot and setting are excellent, I wouldn't change a thing, but the grammar needs improvement. It's not the words, but the commas and periods. There are places you need to put them at but didn't. Other than a few basic grammatical errors, it's a good read!
I read the synopsis, and it's amazing. I don't know how frequently you update, but overall it's good. Demons, reincarnation, and everything is just nice. Keep up, author!
Great work! The way the story is written is really impressive! Your writing style and making of the characters too is overwhelming. Will wait for even more such great works from you in the future.
The plot seems interesting but there are way too many grammatical mistakes and sometimes there are even difficulties to understand what the author really wants to convey. Please do proofread ur novel so that wt u want to say really comes across to the readers.
Great world building and descriptions. The start really pulls you in and makes you curious about the mc's past. Really excited to see how the story unfolds.
Hey there_ since I have started this book I'm planning an eerie path for this story in a world close yet far from reality. Waiting to hear your thoughts about it, I would appreciate helping with improvements
the story is well written along with the plot but the puntuaction errors and a few grammar mistakes kind of brings the story a little off, i’d suggest to proofread your story and edit it a bit ! good work !
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